“Dear G-god in H-h-heaven, look after us in t-this our d-darkest hour,” Pam’s voice comes out muffled and meek, half swallowed by Gina’s shoulder. “Deliver u-hus from evil and grant us y-your p-p-protecti-“
With a sudden sucking sound – chluuuuuuurp! – Pam vanishes from Gina’s arms.
Gina stumbles backwards, terror flashing across her face. Her mouth gapes open and closed like a landed fish, but she makes no sound.
“No, wait!” I say when I see her reaching for the little gold crucifix dangling from her neck, but it’s too late. A moment later, Gina is gone, too, and I’m all alone in our office.
Out in the street, the screams are growing louder, more frantic.
Like lambs to the slaughter.
December 15th, 2014 at 11:15 am
Awesome read Evan. Can’t wait for your first publishing.
January 14th, 2015 at 4:03 pm
Jim, so sorry for my tardy reply! Only just today noticed I had a comment waiting for approval. I’m glad you enjoyed it and don’t worry…you’ll be one of the first to know whenever I get my first “yes!”
February 28th, 2015 at 7:19 pm
Looking good Evan I like the way the sample leaves you
( wanting MORE) lol and wtf is going on outside and where is Gina gone how? and why?
March 5th, 2015 at 1:46 pm
Thanks so much, Daryl! Really appreciate your positive feedback! I had a blast writing this story and really hope it finds a publisher soon. I’ll keep you posted!
March 13th, 2015 at 5:40 pm
E.T. Or can I just call you E? Just read the excerpt of Unrapture, just gotta say I want more, where can I get the full story?
March 14th, 2015 at 10:13 am
Thanks, Brad! You can call me Evan.
Really glad you liked the excerpt for The Unrapture! Unfortunately it’s not yet published, but I hope it will be soon. I’ll keep you posted!